K.M. Hirosaki (kmhirosaki) wrote in plain_english,
K.M. Hirosaki

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Believability in sex

I posted something very similar to another community, but I got the idea to perhaps ask the folks here, as well, to get a different sort of viewpoint. Consider the following story:

( "Maerchentic Infatuation" - M/M, mind control, magic, mild N/C - NC-17 )

I'll warn folks right off the bat that this is a 'Furry' story (i.e., involving sentient humanoid animal-like characters), so if that offends you, you may wish to not read it.

My question is this: all other things being equal, is this story believable? The story itself, essentially, is about sex, but I like to think that it's not a 'PWP'-type story by any stretch of the imagination. It hinges on magic as the Plot Point (note capitals), and I wanted to make sure that it didn't seem like a trite old Plot Device.

I realize that this is a story that's probably not everybody's cup of tea, but any and all feedback that I could get would be wonderful.
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